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i was just drowning duck by ~hamzaz:iconhamzaz:



كلماتك تعيد تنشيط خيالى المجنحا
بالدعوات وصدق الكلمات بهذا افرحا
دفعتنى لاطلق خيالى بعد ان  ترنحا
اطلقتنى حرا لارى صدقا طائرا وتسامحا
فدومى بالخير والخير لك فقد التقينا فقط البارحا

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yesterday i met her
....i was thinking in bad way

thinking to give up
and never wake up

trying  to walk alone
think alone & die alone
and lock myself in dark zone

she pull me up.
saying be strong , and never give up

that`s how i woke up

she sent me beautiful present
words included her accent

wishing me luck ....
for me , am just swimming duck
was drowning ... in ocean of sadness
with no hope
with no luck

she said : do your best
as soon you remember who you are
god will help you ...
as well as you never give up

swimming in her words ,
reforming myself as she want to see me
and to be more than that drowning duck

now am still with no hope
but at least i got her luck

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©2006-2009 ~hamzaz
:iconhamzaz:

Author's Comments

Humm
trying to translate the arabic one

but i got new english one .......
not that typical , i know

some feelings here not there

the arabic got it`s beauty in simple words
the english got more feelings and words can`t exclude in the arabic one

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:iconeman-ezzat:
very good ... very sad

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Time to know him better [link]
:iconhamzaz:
Thanx
now am just sad duck
.......with mass of her luck

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Member of *designerscouch

The truth is "hate speech" only to those who have something to hide

Venceremos
:iconvampire-kid:
aw...that's sad. but it's lovely as well.
Bravo. Your words are deeply moving.

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"Life isn't fair. It's just fairer than death, that's all."
-William Goldman "The Princess Bride"

:star: in dear memory of ~LordPirateMonkey :star:
:iconhamzaz:
many thanx for seeing it moving .... i`ll make it more sad next time
what do you think ?

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Member of *designerscouch

The truth is "hate speech" only to those who have something to hide

Venceremos
:iconrhwom-livcalvin:
I'm completely moved. This is so sad.. but, like you said, at least you got her luck.:D

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Gotta have a towel
:iconvampire-kid:
i like sad poetry. It shows the truth to human kind.

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"Life isn't fair. It's just fairer than death, that's all."
-William Goldman "The Princess Bride"

:star: in dear memory of ~LordPirateMonkey :star:
:iconeman-ezzat:
ربنا يديك حظ كبير مع غيرها ... قول آمين

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Time to know him better [link]
:iconeman-ezzat:
لسه ماقلتش رأيك فى الشغل!!! أيه الحكايه ،مش فاضى

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Time to know him better [link]
:iconcartoonlover:
sad but good. =D

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I was here...or so you thought...
:iconzerosector:
always, be strong , be successful and be patient

--
Proverb : Absence makes the heart grow fonder.
meant : When you are away from someone you love, you love them even more.

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